It'll be using the rhyme scheme AABA.
Let that sleeping dog lie
If you don't want to die.
Please, I beg you,
Let that sleeping dog lie
Why, Don't you see?
Those fangs come up to your knee.
So please,
Heed my plea.
If you don't want to die.
Please, I beg you,
Let that sleeping dog lie
Why, Don't you see?
Those fangs come up to your knee.
So please,
Heed my plea.
It's only two verses, but I suppose it's a start.
EDIT: stanza 3 draft 1.
EDIT: stanza 3 draft 1.
No! Don't go an stroke him!
I don't want to put you in a coffin!
That dog's a danger,
He is fuelled by Sin.
I don't want to put you in a coffin!
That dog's a danger,
He is fuelled by Sin.
the last lines' a bit dodgy, If I can think of a better one, I'll change it.
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