Sunday 24 May 2009

New poem start.

a verse to a new poem popped into my head today. It's just teh first thoughts, but it's a start.
It'll be using the rhyme scheme AABA.

Let that sleeping dog lie
If you don't want to die.
Please, I beg you,
Let that sleeping dog lie

Why, Don't you see?
Those fangs come up to your knee.
So please,
Heed my plea.

It's only two verses, but I suppose it's a start.

EDIT: stanza 3 draft 1.

No! Don't go an stroke him!
I don't want to put you in a coffin!
That dog's a danger,
He is fuelled by Sin.

the last lines' a bit dodgy, If I can think of a better one, I'll change it.

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