new poem for story start.

this is kind of like a prophetical poem.

Nine shall be Elves voice soft and pure,
Eleven for Dwarfs voice rasping yet loud,
Two for Brother Men, standing Back to Back.
One for Silence, deadly and Terrible.

One to find Them,
Slowly find Them,
One to break Them,
One to rule in Silence.

That may be at the front page, or it may be a quote that goes something like this:

And so They stood back-to-back,

Brothers in Song.

Poem for story (abandoned)

I'm creating a ConLang on my other Blogger Blog, and I've been formulating the starts of a poem for said story.

The Colours flow from after the Beginning.
The Colours flow from after The Bard.
The Colours flow and keep on flowing.
And so the Bard Sang and used The Colours to shape the world.

Then he shaped The Colours into plants and animals.
Flaunë! Fora!

currently unfinished- no time now.


scratch that poem, that is nolonger in use

New poem start.

a verse to a new poem popped into my head today. It's just teh first thoughts, but it's a start.
It'll be using the rhyme scheme AABA.

Let that sleeping dog lie
If you don't want to die.
Please, I beg you,
Let that sleeping dog lie

Why, Don't you see?
Those fangs come up to your knee.
So please,
Heed my plea.

It's only two verses, but I suppose it's a start.

EDIT: stanza 3 draft 1.

No! Don't go an stroke him!
I don't want to put you in a coffin!
That dog's a danger,
He is fuelled by Sin.

the last lines' a bit dodgy, If I can think of a better one, I'll change it.

Mark Twain quote.

"Better to keep your mouth shut and appear stupid than to open it and remove all doubt."
- Mark Twain

'Walking in the snow'.

This is a little something that came into my head while I was watching the BBC program "Why we love poetry" or somethign like that... I'd like soem comments, please...

Walking in the snow.
As I plod on
through the snow,
around the trees,
I glare up at the cold in the air.
It's mocking me,
putting me in my place.


Then some snow floats down,
settling on my nose.
And for the first in a long time,
a smile,
creeps onto,
my face.

Hope you liked it... Please comment, even if you hate it, especially with some constructive advice, etc...

P.S. the last three lines were originally one line, I then added the commas for effect, but it looked weird and I changed it to three separate lines.

P.P.S. I forgot to say, It's a ten-minute first draft, so improvements will probably be needed.

Hi!

Hiya!
I'm James (A.K.A. Zilenserz).

This is my second Blogger Blog, and this is going to be my general, unspecified blog.

My Diary of Animal Crossing can be found here. (I'm only on Livejournal for the communities)

Also, my diary of my progress in a) creation of a new imaginary dimesion, which will be logically correct, b) a story to populate it and c) the language for it.... But in reverse order... can eb found here.